Chills going up my spine
Every single thought of you being mine
Settling fears
Quite tears
Lonely nights
Days when I wish
Everything could be alright
Moments to save
Secrets to take to the grave
Everything you say
Believing your perfect
In every single way
Love seen but unheard
Wanting to say something
But cant find the words
I cant see you here
I just want to be there
being held in your arms
Never being harmed
Staying safe
By your side
Never ever leaving
We'll never divide
Pictures of us
Kept in people's hearts
Knowing in their minds
We'll never part
Author notes
#3
Written November 30th, 2003
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A contest entry
- My 1st contest! by KadamsWandler.
375 points, ended January 15, 2004, 11 entries
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Wow I like this poem it's a great one. Sometimes you just don't want to believe that bad thing can happen but they do happen.
~Chantal~
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Thats a really great poem, I relate to that totally, I hope you keep your muse, it seems to be an inspiration.
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awesome poem here! great write, love the flow to it. i love to see how other see things in their poems. i liked this one alot.
and thank you so much for your comments on my poem "the smile"
you were so kind with your somments. and im glad the poem touched you and you could relate to it. that's what i ment for it to do. and i'm glad i acheived that. i do hope that you soon will have more good days than bad ahead of you. i bet you are a really sweet person inside and if others can't see tht then you should surround youself with others that do. keep writing i'll check out more of your work and thank you again for your comments on my poem
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Well done...I liked this poem...with the words you used and how it was set up and everything...
~CWM~ -
thats such a sweet poem
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