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this sky is merciless

 
 

 

 

 
she never knows the answers
for lacking balance
between her needs and wants;
 
spends a lifetime asking mirrors
"who",
 
ever aware
that those lakes hold no lady,
with sword
 
or otherwise
           [ yet ]
 
which is strange
by the contrast of cuts
she's endured.
 
 

 

 
a thousand cloud-watchers
peer into her sky,
 
 
each finds a different shape
 
 

 

but of course, all perception
is relative
to the angle of skyward,
even her own

 

 

so - she has no answers,
just endless
and accurate questions ...
 
 
 
 

 

 

 

 

 

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