Loving you is killing me
and I feel its bitter pain.
You ask for my forgiveness,
then you hurt me once again.
I know I must be foolish,
but somewhere down the line
I'll mask this hurt inside me
and forgive you one more time.
You know, so many times before,
I have given in.
I've forgiven your transgressions
and hoped you'd change within.
I walk my path of anguish
where foolish people go.
Yes, Loving you is killing me,
but still, I love you so.
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"Quickie Contest" Prompt #1
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A contest entry
- PIF QUICKIE by creationsfromheart.
465 points, ended March 7, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - SHORT POEMS PART 2 by Blooming Poet.
700 points, ended March 23, 2008, 129 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful poem. I like the rhyme and rythme of it. Good luck in my contest.
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Ok I think this is really good but you know that already
I think you managed to paint a picture and to me that is well-written poetry.
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ohhhhh this is beautiful. i can really relate to it. one of my favorites ive read!!
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this was just a powerful piece. Loved it hun.
Greatjob on the HM
Love,
Shannon
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a wonderful poem my friend i walk the path of anguish where foolish people go yes loving you is killing me but god i love you so
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Excellent Work Dear you captured this type of abuse very well. If only some Woman would realize that it is not LOVE Good LUCk !!
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OH I KNOW THE FEELING
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SOOO EXCELLENT GOD BLESS
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aw another wonder write from your pen and heart, I lov this thank you for sharing and writing for the contest Good luck my friend
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