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Common Ground

 

 

Just when I thought we were getting somewhere,

you turned around and cheated on me again.

Just as my heart was beginning to mend,

you found a way to break me down once more.

 

I always hoped that we could find some common ground,

and that in time you would settle down with me.

I never dreamed that you could be so cruel,

now I find myself lost in unfamiliar territory.

 

Loving you used to be so easy for me,

now I can't even trust the person that you are inside.

It kills me to know how naive I can sometimes be.

Now that you're gone, I know that in time I will learn to move on.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Prompt: "Loving You Is Killing Me"

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  • paulcreates silver member
    April 5, 2008
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    Sad write but spoken from the heart. Thank you for entering.
    Paul


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    March 7, 2008
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    Well Done--You poured your heart out! Congratulations on the bronze!


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 7, 2008

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    Very Well done. I HATE CHEATERS lol Good luck with your poem Dear hope yu do well with it in me Sissies Contest

  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    March 7, 2008
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    A very sad and heartfelt composition--
    Good luck in the contest!!


  • creationsfromheart
    March 7, 2008

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    aw such a sad heart wrenching write it trully does make me feel so sad, this is great and good luck in the contest.

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