When I feel the wind pick up it's breeze
I try to visualize your face, and frame
I can send love's Ode to you, if you please
On the wings of the Wind that whispers your name
May you hear my voice as I say I love you
May you feel my arms hold you so tight
Let the Wind carry all my love so true
As it enfolds you all through the night
Kisses and Hugs all sprinkled with Stardust
My body's warmth is felt in the Wind
My footsteps come running, to find you I must
For our life together is about to begin
So stand on the hill as the wind passes by
Feel all I have said, catch hold of it true
My love covers you full and complete, as I cry
My Darling, My Love let me lie down next to you
-Katie Lazette-7:45 P M
Author notes
I hope I counted correctly.
A contest entry
- Give me your 100th poem by Loveandblessings2u.
975 points, ended March 16, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Say what you think
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Beautiful love poem.
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" So stand on the hill as the wind passes by
Feel all I have said, catch hold of it true
My love covers you full and complete, as I cry
My Darling, My Love let me lie down next to you :,
That is just so beautiful
really nice writing.
Good luck.
Loveandb;essings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Thank you Loveandblessings2u for your kind comment on my poem.
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This is a sweet poem... I really enjoyed the way you described the wind as a messenger, it was very well done
Keep writing
Polly
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Thank you Polaja for your comment. I am glad you enjoyed my poem.
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What a beautiful 100th poem my friend! Such amazing imagery and emotion. I so enjoyed reading such love within your beautiful words. Good luck in the contest
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Thank you tawk. so glad you enjoyed my poem.
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Beautiful
Beautiful expression with lovely images
katie! you have sounded audible in pleasing silence too -
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Thank You Purush
So glad you liked my poem. Thanks for reading it and for your comment. I appreciate it.
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