You're back in my life as a burst of madness,
made it beautiful, showers of happiness,
a woman from girl by filling so much love,
but even though, sometimes become doubtful.
Since you're there, found the taste of living,
a delicate coverage of cystalline sheets of love,
so felt moments enough to write a novel;
to see with my own eyes, a perfect smile tender.
A sunshine of life, moon of my nights,
clever in putting lightness in luring heart,
a transcendance to bewitch in my mind,
to overcome all fears on heaps of pain ever.
Simply, thank you for being only mine,
a divine sphere of serene sun of pleasures,
for you, I'll do endless rounds, like
drowning in ocean of inebriant imaginations.
You're my guardian angel in white pure forehead,
brings back by mourning on two wings of azure,
in holy outpourings my heart was closed,
'cause I did not know, how much you love me.
Author notes
Prompt: Option # 2
My guardian angel
A contest entry
- Options [PIF] by Beauty Of Silence.
650 points, ended March 19, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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very nice! this is what i was looking for!! thank you for entering!
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Brilliant! Your poem vas really great! i loved every line, it had an amazing flow! your last stanza was perfectly fine! I love your last line... its like a pause that leads to silence!
Your words were clear... and this was such a lovely write... such sweet emotions put to words... it just drifted me away... to somewhere so gorgeous!
Thank you for this lovely entry! best wishes!
Much love always,
Ranji
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