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Father

To my one and only father,
The one who if he could
Stop me from growing
And be his little girl forever he would

To the one who stays with me
When no one else would
To always be there for me
Like any good father should

We may not always agree
But we always apologize
And you're the one i come to for help
Because i know that you wont tell me lies

To my loving father i tell you now
And i tell you true
How much i love you.

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    April 6, 2008

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    Welcome to allpoetry and thanks for entering!

    This is beautiful. I have the feeling all fathers would stop us if they could, lol.

    Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest
    I hope you enjoy allpoetry

    Faerie
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  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    March 31, 2008

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    Thank you for your entry and welcome to allpoetry

    How very sweet and loving. Its always nice to hear about a good father for a change. Nice flow and structure. Thanks for sharing.

    I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.

    God Bless
    Tammy
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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    March 8, 2008

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    Wonderful! A really precious piece about someone who certainly has a great deal of influence in eveyone's life.
    Thanks so much for your entry
    Gaylene


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    March 8, 2008

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Fantastic write for your father
    Full of respect and love it is a delight to read


    Thank you for your entry
    Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Grimoire
    March 7, 2008
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    Mwaaaaaaaa.... very sincere and heartfelt poem. good luck in the contest.


  • Dienush
    March 7, 2008

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Aww now that's so sweet and such a nice gesture, I know your father will love it Good luck in the contest.

    ~Diana

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