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cellophane dreams

sitting here
in the
neon
afterglow

certain
ticker quotes
flash across
the empty
mind

these
flashing
red lights
harshly
intone
emotion

something
i had long
since forgotten
in the mass
of concrete
and asphalt
landscapes

the constant buzz
of those machines
has made me all
but forget
the drone
of insects

and there's
one who has
pulled me
back out of
it all
back
into
the
wild

and
the
memories
come flooding
back to me
as i now
recall
what
once
was

so soon
too soon
the gray
world
calls
wanting
my soul
again

and so i wait
leading the
double life
containing
my true self
underneath
and within
this plastic
exterior

and i
can
only
unwrap
my secret
cellophane
dreams of
natural
beauty
and
primal
purity

Author notes

yay me up late = crazy stuff.. lets see how that looks in the morning.... lol

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Comments

  • stuckonlove
    January 2, 2009
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    Deep

    Your well goes deep , dude. I feel shallow now compared to you


  • Blissfullhatred silver member
    March 7, 2008
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    How do you write these things? they are soooo good