The echoes of my empty heart
drown the words of your lips.
Your affirmations of devotion
are merely empty shells
of another's broken promises.
The fault not yours,
tho' the painful jagged
scars of recent memory
seem to disqualify me
from true love hugs and kisses.
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option 5-despair
A contest entry
- Options Contest by Simply Simple.
1000 points, ended June 7, 2008, 83 entries
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This is great! Its short, but represents its emotion very well. Good luck in the contest!
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Thank you, I love this site. I have been more inspired here than I have in a long time.
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I really loved this. Thank you for the entry. It was quite good and fit it's option. ^.^
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Thank you!
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You're welcome. ^.^
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I tthink this is awesome
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