music videos, movies,
drilling the idea in my head:
I want to draw you into my arms
and kiss you like forever.
I don't need to draw a breath
if I can just breathe you.
In my mind,
let this never stop.
We will spread our love,
a blanket on the ground.
Laying on that blanket under the stars,
we will identify the constellations
and light up the sky with our fire.
Author notes
"If I had my own world, I'd build you an empire, from here to the far lands, to spread love like violence." - Angels and Airwaves
How can I improve this?
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Not bad. If you want to improve it try adding some depth within the essence of the moment. Make something trivial gain importance just by its mere presence being alluded to.... you asked.
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