Down Georgia way there is a gal
Bridget is her name
well it seems today is her birthday
so with balloons and flowers set in place
let's set about making a sumptious birthday feast
a gorgeous cake with lots of cream
sandwiches, pies and cocktail frankfurts
presents aplenty tied with enormous bows
and friends all round to sing
'Hip hip hooray'
to help her celebrate her day just right
but please just don't give her a fright
as you shout
'Happy 17th Birthday Sweet Bridget'
Author notes
DolphinLass wishes you a Happy Birthday Bridget, (mine is 9th March). As we are Pisceans I chose the fish background. Good luck all and you can put this in her book if you wish.
In a list
A contest entry
- BFFL's Birthday!!!! (I REALLY NEED ENTRIES PLZ!) by Jeneralix.
900 points, ended March 9, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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a good poem, oh i am all for birthdays and cake, cake is good on every day, well it must be someone's birthday so let's have cake all the time and get fat.
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I loved this poem. Happy late birthday to you too. Yay Pisces! LOL. This was a fun poem and it was very interesting to read. I loved it! Thanks.
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Thank you for entering my contest! It's a sweet poem and I know she'll like it! It's a very fun poem!
I'll come back later and comment on it some more. Promise.
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