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The Last Blood Drips

I close my claw hand tight
Tightly into a fist
Where my claws dig into my flesh
And I let the blood drip

I close my eyes tightly
So I can try and see my fate

I see my fate and I see in the years ahead
That I wont have a mate
And I squeeze my fist tighter letting more blood drip

What was this that I have found?
Maybe she was not just my mate as I thought
Maybe she was my love

Can someone so cold, so evil, have such a thing?
This human so good, so pure

Is it really possible?
A full fledged demon,
Who despises humans
Be in love with such a person?

NO!
No demon can

That is why my mate, my love
Is bathing in her blood

From my demonic hands
I killed my mate, my love

That is why I have no fate
No mate

For this Sesshoumaru,
This Sesshoumaru shall not wake
For the last drop of blood drips
It is now I
I who is bathing in my blood
Mine and my loves’ blood
We will be
Together
Forever

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This is a poem about Sesshoumaru from Inuyasha.

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  • interesting

    this poem is interesting, but it needs work... it seems to be too repetitive... you need to use different words because when you use different words it tends to keep the reader interested and leads the eye to read more, like the lines in a painting...
    p.s. GO SESSHY!!


  • ShadowHex777
    March 10
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    sweet

    please put your name in the authors notes
  • wow amazing write doll
    i missed reading from you, so it was amazing,
    i hope you are ok i love you so much..xoxo