It’s sometimes smooth, hard or just in pebbles
What you eat will show what your poop will be
So watch what you eat, don’t be a rebel
Unhealthy foods make your butt sting like bees
Dehydration makes pebbles in your poop
Vegetables will make your poop turn green
It is not good to eat unhealthy foods
With vegetables your poop will smell sweet
Drinking only juice makes it watery
Candy is unhealthy but eye catchy
Liquid foods make your poop feel buttery
Eat healthy, your butt wouldn’t feel fiesty
Eating sometimes puts you in a good mood
Be safe and don’t have a lot of bad foods
A contest entry
- round contest #3 (anything) by serenity silvermoon.
600 points, ended May 7, 2008, 27 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - All for All (im taking all poems and no rules =) )) by Erozay.
550 points, ended May 9, 2008, 38 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I think it goes perfectly with this contest, nothing like a little poop to keep the pee company!!!
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gross
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its really interesting you know a lot about poop!
did you know aspargus makes your wee smell funny?
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no...how?
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I dont know it just does
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well what i do know is that all vegetables (most anyhow) make your poop smell horrible lolz..but thats just being healthy
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LOl This is a first! Best to you in the contest.
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POOP!
this is an odd, odd, different poem,hehe......
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wow such a messed up poem 0_0
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hey this is Dani...the judge of the contest. just to let you know that i do not know who you are...so if you know me please don't be upset if i leave you a comment that does not make you smile. it's just i'm judging this contest and i wanna be able to seek out the good and get rid of the bad. when i read the title and saw that it had "POOP" in it...i was like about time. at least someone hasa the guts to write about poop and make it sound funny and really good. i like it. best of luck to you in the contest.
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You know, this is a really strange poem.
I don't really think it is gross
Only seriously weird
I have to admit, this is the first poem that I have seen in here that "stinks"
But damn, it is absolutely hilarious
this is really funny in a rather strange way
I kind of like this piece, shitty ass it may be
see you around
Zarok
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Hehe.... Oh dear.... This is quite different. I like how you are serious, but this poem is quite funny anyhow..
Nice.
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this is a great poem you have penned!
thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! NineTailedFox
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ummm wow... this is very ... different lol but its funny...nice
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Funny Funny Funny!!
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Ah, um... delightful? Haha, an amusing little didactic piece of poetry.
However I specifically asked for freeverse, not form poetry so I don't think this will win. Better luck next time.
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quite the PSA on poo there. Amusing though. Nice
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wats psa?
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i like the last stanza. the rest is well... shitty. lol joking.
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ummm?
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lol. its really funny, but behind all the... poop... {lol} it sent a a good message: eat healthy for the sake of you behind. i liked it.
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I was going to say interesting topic of a poem one you do not see everyday till i read your comment this was for a school assignment good topic I have to say with bowl cancer and such people should talk more about the subject more as it is a serous great write my friend
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yea i kno..i jus neva thought of writin a poem about pooy, ya know?..like who writes bout poop lolz..thnx 4 the coment =)..n yea i tink people shud tlk bout it more..cuz it is a serious topic..but my science teacher assigned it 2 b funny b/c she was tlkin bout how shes always watchin her poop n stuff n wat it means n every1 was jus laghin there heads off lolz..o n am sry 2 hear that u have cancer..u do have cancer rite or r u jus tlkin bout ppl in general..hmm..sry 2 hear that
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ewwwwwwww
Wait thats not gross its just a normal body function, just not used to reading about in a poem, you sound like a doctor here. LOL -
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well..this was actually an assignment 4 extra credit in my class and the rules were u were supposed 2 write about poop lolz..so yea..most of my poems r very depressing n lovey..but this 1 not so much lolz =p
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