On a cruise is where I would be
if I had to choose some place just for you and me
we would sail across the ocean oh so blue
without a care, sipping a drink or two
With a sky of blue
a deckchair too
a magazine or book
along with your loving look
I would cruise to a paradise across the sea
with plenty for us to see
maybe some dolphins and whales to watch
and an icy cold glass of scotch
This is what I would be doing now
if only it were possible somehow
Nothing could surpass the warmth of the sun
and the love of my hon
On a cruise is where I would be
if I had to choose some place just for you and me
Author notes
No names please as its anonymous contest...good luck all
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A contest entry
- What do you wish you were doing right now? by strangerforeigner.
425 points, ended March 8, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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a good piece, a cruise sounds good to me, i would not mind going on one myself, i think it would be very relaxing and entertaining at the same time.
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What a cute write! A cruise ship would be a lovely place to be right now, away from the last dredges of winter. Thanks for entering!
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