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Do You?

How can I escape it
It’s playing over and over
All the emotions
All the sites
I’m just sick and tired
Of feeling like the 3rd wheel
When really I’m part of the couple
It’s just bugging me that
I can’t seem to trust you
I can’t feel comfortable
When there are girls all around
I only can think “Can I trust him???
Or is he going to throw it back in my face??”
I don’t want to break up
You don’t need that at this time
But I don’t deserve to be treated
Like all I am is a precession
That you can put up on a shelf
That you can show off to all your mates
I’m a human being
Not some sort of play thing
For all I care you could die…
No wait….
Take that back….
I DO CARE!!!!
The difference bout me and you
I know how to care with out upsetting
I think you do to but you choose not to try
All my mates know that I’m not happy
But only a few know why
I’m even quite in class and that’s scary
I suppose that I’m writing this
Because all I want from you is to be
Loved, cared for and not ignored
But I don’t know if I can get that from you…
Can you answer my question???

DO YOU LOVE ME…..OR AM I JUST A THING TO YOU???

Author notes

This was Written about 3 yrs ago bout one of my ex's... so yeah...

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  • skittles loves you
    March 10, 2008
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    awwwwwwwww are u the guy in this or are u the girl...


  • jstrauch
    March 7, 2008

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    a boy lol my baby was datin a boy well i shouldnt speak lol i love it though ur an amazing writer and i cant wait to see your full potential I love you


  • Grimoire
    March 7, 2008
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    Tie two birds together, and though they have four wings, they cannot fly.
    ~Confucious~

  • skittles loves you
    March 6, 2008
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    WOW THAT IS A VERY GOOD POEM

  • skittles loves you
    March 6, 2008
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    omfg i loved the poem expacialy the ending


    I suppose that I’m writing this
    Because all I want from you is to be
    Loved, cared for and not ignored
    But I don’t know if I can get that from you…
    Can you answer my question???



    you should checkl out soem of mine
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