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remember the seasons

remember the fall
the music is ending
replaced by the scritch-scratch
of pencils on paper
and erasers to follow

orange leaves
sacrificing their own lives
as they crumble
to the absent ground



remember the winter
when two in love curl up
by the crackling fire
murmuring passages from novels
and sweet nothings

thankful for each other
sweethearts lock eyes
and lock hearts all at once
lost in one another
in all the awesomeness of adoration




remember the spring
friends emerge from hibernation
spreading their wings
beneath the blue sky

stuffed full of life
everything is alive!
and the flowers bloom
surrounding us with excitement



remember the summer
when narcotic ribbons of sun-rays
drizzle down our faces
leaving spotty freckles in their wake

when dragonflies zoom
across forgotten colors
tracing smiles
among the stars







remember the seasons
one after another
each leaving memories
and dreams to consider.

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  • broken-colours
    April 14, 2008

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    "remember the summer
    when narcotic ribbons of sun-rays
    drizzle down our faces
    leaving spotty freckles in their wake

    when dragonflies zoom
    across forgotten colors
    tracing smiles
    among the stars"

    No, my dear, YOU are the amazing one. This was brilliance. If you don't win in this contest, then... then... then I don't know what. But I know you're going to!


  • Simply Simple
    March 9, 2008

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    This was a really great poem. You used the word bank right? Well please add your option and author's name to your author's notes. Thank you. ^.^