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Foot prints

 

Along this beaten path,

Fork's split many times.

Different points I

have traversed

both sides.

 

I've been through

the barren Autumns

to find the greenest

Spring. Fought

blistering heat of

Summer only to

turn icy in those

subzero Winters!

 

Now I look back

seeing the foot

prints of my loved

ones as they tread

paths I have beaten

down before them!

Author notes

I chose to compare the moments of my life to the different seasons. I've been through many moments where I had to chose to go one way or the other and now I see my children living their lives and chosing their own paths and I see the traces of their feet prints as they follow their own paths! To me that is the Hall mark of all my " right," choices.

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  • SerenityNChains gold member
    March 8, 2008

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    Simply wonderful comparatives here! Life is so like seasons, everchanging. You used such wonderful metaphors to tell your tale. Thank you for such an inspiring entry my friend, and best of luck.

    Blessed be,
    Billie Jean