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My Morpho

skies blushed like wooed brides
and charmed the earth with her warmth

~ morphed freedom awaits.

Author notes

"This is a great form of poetry
that flows from my thoughts,
though the picture I see is greater,
I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."

A morpho is an indigenous South American butterfly that is mainly distinguished by its bright, metallic blue wings.

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  • Tzipora
    October 6
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    nicelyy donee

  • InBetweenThoughts
    March 21, 2008

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    Thank you so much for your Haiku I appreciate your entry... All counts are good, good form,and authors notes, thank you..best wishes, Ken IBT


  • J.J. Sass
    March 6, 2008
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    Nice little haiku you have here, and yes you're right there is a critique - only in the form of technicality though. Usually in haiku, lines are not capitalized so you may want to look at that.

    Apart from that all seems well - line counts are in order, and the theme is very appropriate.

    Best wishes in the contest.