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Waiting for you

Everything is already over
You say coldly
The words only drop to the floor
Look towards a tomorrow without any peace
On the night when even prayers would have disappeared
A shooting star passes by slowly as if its pointing and laughing at me
There's nothing that won't change
Even if my life ends
This love will not disappear
It's something that will live forever
Even if dreams are hidden in darkness
Love will never die
Love will never flees away
Love will never ever fades away
If someday my life ends
This love for you will not
It's a feeling that will live forever
Though it's too late to cry out I love you.
The wind still blowing, my heart still aching
Frozen in time
Waiting for you.

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I wanted more, just i couldn't think of anything to add. For that i am sorry.

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  • tawk gold member
    March 7, 2008
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    Such a heartfelt and sad poem. Wonderful imagery and emotions. It really touched my heart.


  • LillianEmrys
    March 6, 2008

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    Very good. I don't know which one wrote it , but it's beautiful. It's never too late to say I love you.


  • Florida Sunshine
    March 6, 2008

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    Wow Bro ~ touching ~ I especially liked:

    "This love will not disappear
    It's something that will live forever
    Even if dreams are hidden in darkness
    Love will never die
    Love will never flees away
    Love will never ever fades away"

    ONLY if it's TRUE! ~ and it can only be felt in the heart ~ It's not the outside package ~ or gazing in the eyes of another soul ~ it's only held deep within the heart ~

    BEAUTIFUL JOB ~ I LUVED it ~