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Dim View Haiku

Myriad snowflakes
Veil summertime scenery -
T.V. rabbit ears


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A traditional 5 7 5 Haiku

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  • Mary O gold member
    October 9, 2008

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    I like the veil and then the pop with T.V. rabbit ears.
    Brought a smile to my face. Got me thinkin' of an idea now.


  • Manicmuze
    March 9, 2008
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    the last line makes this... i liked it.
    nicely done,
    ~ wendy