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fell in love in the end

I hope you don't know,
I hope you don't see,

All of the feelings
Bursting inside of me.

I wish I could tell you
I wish I could let you know

All of these feelings
I would like to show.

I lay in bed
Hope and pray

You will wake up
And realize some day.

Maybe one day you will know
Maybe you will see

Although I meant nothing to you,
You meant everything to me.

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  • aestival
    March 8, 2008

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    Aw! Short and painful. It seemed pretty hopeful, like just starting to fall in love, so the ending was a nice twist – totally changed the meaning of the poem... Nice job.