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Missing You

Whispering winds of shattered dreams
Broken hearts tears unseen
Where did you go, why didn’t I see
No last words no goodbyes
Just up and left I have only why’s
Lonely and hurt what’s left to do
Just wanted to say I miss you!

Author notes

So i am not so good with the sort poems but im trying any thought to how i can make this better feel free to tell me love lots, xoxox

what can i do to improve this..?

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  • Stickboy gold member
    March 20, 2008

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    well If you ask me you did an awesome job on this I look forward to reading more from you soon. Thanks for sharing this
    Sean

  • know one
    March 6, 2008
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    I'm not sure how to make it better but I think it has great flow