desires
shattered,
mold another
being,
unfailed resumption,
heart starts beating.
Author notes
passion in 10 words.
A contest entry
- The Quickie-Passion Piece by 2lullabyhaven.
425 points, ended March 6, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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GO LEE B. I love it...so........ten wordish!
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A Great Summation..................
of passion here that you have penned!!!You have gne right to the heart of the matter with this short to the point poem. You certainly earned the gold with this as it fits the contest perfectly. Thanks for your lovely comment on my poem "Via Dolorosa" as well I appreciate it. I was glad to visit your page and read your profile to see that you are a CHristian! Yes it was wonderful WHat Jesus did for us!!! Thanks for sharing your talent with me!!!~~Toni~~
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hey lee this is such a cool wat of writing!!
Kim
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a well deserved gold
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Wow, love the angle taken with this write, thanks for your entry and good luck
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thanks!
thank you so much for the gold! this is the first contest i had ever entered and am delighted to have recieved your award.
ps.- what did you mean when you said
"gold winner- please pay it forward."?
sorry, im a beginner at this. ;]
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