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For You

You’re still my prince charming
Only now you don’t know
You’re keeping me alive
Because I cant let you go

You left me to soon
My beloved one
And now without you
I can no longer see the sun

The darkness in my heart
Has now blocked it out
I want to yell at you
But you wouldn’t hear my shouts

How could you leave me?
Why did you have to go?
You must know I love you
More then I’ll ever show

But you don’t care now
Now you’re finally happy
And I’m glad that you are
Even tho you’re not with me

But I can not follow you
My dearly beloved
I must carry on
Even tho I wish I was dead

I must keep going
Not because I want to
Its what you’d want
So I’ll live for you

Author notes

For the contest "loss of love" by LanguishedLad. I hope you enjoy.

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  • LanguishedLad
    March 8, 2008

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    Well penned

    Thankyou for entering this contest and best of luck in the comp, I liked it alot and please don't get discouraged if you don't get a trophy for I have had many good writes and this is 1 of them.


  • Love-less
    March 8, 2008
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    Its so pretty and so emotionable


  • sinisterkitten
    March 6, 2008
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    nice poem. it flows well and tells a good story.