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Home is Where the Heart is

You're leavin,
runnin away.
Your heart is broken
or... so you say.

Been a long time now
Since you said you'd go.
But hey, who's countin?
I just want you to know

Home is where the heart is,
well, my heart is split in two.
Half of home is here
and half of it is you.
Home is where the heart is,
my heart is split in two.
Half of home is here
and half of it is you.

Been too many years now
since I last touched your face.
Been chasin after you,
but I can't win this race.

I know inside me
you'll come to your senses
and someday you'll see me
and I'll be the other side of the fence

Oh, home is where the heart is,
well, my heart is split in two.
Half of home is back there
and half of it is you.
Home is where the heart is,
my heart is split in two.
Half of home is here with me
and half of it is you.

Half of home is here with me...
Half of it's with you.

Author notes

A wonderful little country style song. Just under four mintes when sung with the instrumental break.

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  • SpydurPoet silver member
    April 12

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    Wow. Wow. This is absolutely stunning. I loved this. I have not read too much poetry lately, but I am glad I read this. You did a fantastic job with this. Beautiful.

    Write on.
    ~*~