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trying to sleep


Trying To Sleep

Shaking
Eyes shut tight
Trying to sleep
But can't
Unable to drift off

Eyes open
Can't stop thinking
Thoughts keeping
Sleep from coming
This lack of sleep
Draining me
Leaving me
Barely able to function

Pacing the floor
Trying to sleep
Exhaustion finally overtakes
Collapsing on the bed
As eyes
Shut tight again
Head hits the pillows
Body finally shuts down
Lets sleep come

Can't stay asleep
Wicked dreams
Of nightmarish events
Haunting sleep
Frightening
Creating paranoia

Soon awake again
Still can't sleep
Still exhausted
Roll over
Try to get comfortable
Trying to sleep

Thoughts return
Overwhelming
Keep me awake
Tears start to fall
Pacing the floor
Yet again

Trying to calm

Trying to sleep

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  • know one
    March 6, 2008
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    well done


  • Melissa Burns
    March 6, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my humble little contest. I am having fun exsposing myself to something different. Good luck


    Oh and how I can relate to this .... sigh....
    Very well done! One of the better ones in this contest