tangerine sunrise
greets arriving buds with dance,
butterflies winging
Author notes
Picture Prompt
Per your request: "This is a great form of poetry
that flows from my thoughts, though the picture I see is greater, I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."
A contest entry
- Haiku by InBetweenThoughts, all welcome by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended April 12, 2008, 45 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful
What a great use of the haiku form. so well expressed. Congratulations on the honorable mention.
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Penman
Thank you for the applauses and such wonderful praise. I just started writing again and I did a haiku to help me get inspired. seamaiden
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A powerful image to bring the beauty and to bring the words in such a magical manner of poetry..love the attempt..well done..
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Ah the haiku, it is soft and meaningful. It shows life and nature. I'm very happy you enjoyed this one. It was fun to write this. Love and God bless, seamaiden
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Thank you so much for your Haiku
I appreciate your entry... All counts are good, good form,and authors notes, thank you..best wishes, Ken IBT
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I loved the picture. It brings so many things to mind. I'm glad you like it. Thank you for the applause and your words so kind. They are greatly appreciated. seamaiden ♥
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DANCING
Hello There.
I enjoyed reading your beautiful haiku about the freshness and energy of a new day. Keep those butterflies winging along...
Good luck in the contest from a fellow contestant.
Have a great day,
BJ.
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Hello there and I'm glad you liked the haiku. I love the picture of Richard Dean Anderson (MacGyver). I wouldn't mind him winging along as each day arose. lol Thank you for the good luck wish and your words so kind. They are greatly appreciated. seamaiden ♥
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a very beautiful image. thanks.
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Thank you for the applause and your kind words. They are greatly appreciated. seamaiden ♥
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Wow
Beautiful! I love the imagery! Good job best blessings! -Fate-
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I'm glad you liked this so much. Thank you for the applause and your words so kind. They are greatly appreciated. seamaiden ♥
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