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razorblade embrace


Another embrace with her razor and
the darkness from inside her falls to the floor.
Controlling every slash she makes.
She's never felt power like this before.

Retracing her steps every night
She finds comfort in the path she creates.
The arms that wrap around her are strong and shielding.
They hold her with love and she looses herself in its embrace.

The path she became so familiar with diminishes,
And she puts its comfort behind her.
She can't stand loving, when the love she offers is turned cold.
She knows no matter how much she loved; it never loved her back.

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  • know one
    March 12, 2008

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    Wow

    yes I definitly like it and yes I think you definitly have talent The truth in this poem is outstanding.I love this poem so much I'm gonna have a look at what else you wrote!just amazing!