Diet pills never did the trick
So you mix it up with your own game
Do not eat are you kidding
If you do you will gain
Must stay that sweet size zero
Must smile through the pain
It is a strive to be so glamour’s
It is a coast you must be willing to play
don’t feed her dont you know she will gain
Through her some pills and a water
That will be her “lunch”
Must stay that sweet size zero
Model as you go down the catwalk
To be glamour’s is a price you must be willing to pay
Author notes
endless-lover
option 5,"Don't feed the models"
A contest entry
- Human Shapes Burned On Concrete Walls-x by Dead Star--x.
525 points, ended March 27, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
tell me what you think, no matter how strong it may be...
Comments
-
Loverly.
=] I love it. -
Great!
Wow, you took the prompt and made an amazing poem from it. Great poem and amusing to read. Thanks for sharing.
-
ooh i saw that pic before on photobucket & i love it♥
"Must stay that sweet size zero"
--those who are a zero are lucky
Dead Star--x -
very nice !!
I really liked it!! Your write really sheds some truth on how some girls are willing to go to the extremes in order to be "size zero." Also really loved how the last line brought the whole piece together. Good luck in the contest !!
-- Spiffy :]
Adding your comment:
