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[ Fiery, undauting ]

Fiery, undauting
dazzling lust

Intensity, burning
never getting enough

Sentimental, luscious
darkening pain

Emotions that trap,
making you feel so insane

Tauting, hating
wanting you so

Empty, Lonley

              LOVE'S
                      A
                        NEVERENDING
                                    FOE

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  • meatloaf89
    March 12, 2008
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    great work you put alot of passion into this great wrk


  • Puppydog gold member
    March 8, 2008

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    BEAUTIFUL!!!!

    Love does indeed carry with it much contradiction. One time you are happy then excited, then scared, all rolled up into one!'s