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In peace and calm

It is  neither the picture prompt
nor a quote munched many a time
nor some selective words listed
only to choose from them to fit in

How should I a write a poem?
basing not on much said love
nor from  very frequently uttered
spiritual or apolitical one!

My thoughts didn't go awry
I am left now free to write
fearless as there in no contest.
Be frank as the poem is  to be scribbled
on a subject without a context

I oblige what all others didn't touch till today.
It is  basing on the feelings of a person on a death bed.
He knows fully well that he is to die surely in a few minutes
"LET MY soul SAIL TO THE ZONES OF HEAVEN in peace and calm"

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  • Sarah957
    March 6, 2008

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    What? No quote or picture prompt? But then how do you write? LOL

    I like the last line :


    LET MY soul SAIL TO THE ZONES OF HEAVEN in peace and calm

    Amen to that! Very catchy.