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Bath Time

I wish I was in the bath
In a Bubble heaven
Instead of dealing in the world's wrath

Soapy bubbles in my hair
Pop pop popping
Lavender sent of salts in the air

Oh how I wish I was in the tub so warm
Out of this cold world
Away from the storm

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  • strangerforeigner
    March 8, 2008
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    Short, sweet, I like it! Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest!


  • DrunkenRam
    March 7, 2008

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    Calgon, Take me away.
    whether it be Calgon or Mister Bubble, nothing takes the world away quicker than a good Bubble Bath.
    just ask my Three year old.