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In a frantic attempt,
To break her heart…
Her brain followed
His died.

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It's a bit of a play on words of the quote...I dunno...I'm bored now -_-
The title is another way of saying heart in french, I believe there are two or three

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  • Dreamana
    July 19, 2008

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    Short, but still one that needed reading a few times. Excellent work. I love the word limit contests.


  • Immortal Obscurity Greeters member
    March 6, 2008

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    This is beautiful! I speak French, so I picked up on the heart thing... This one just had so many different meanings, and I found myself trying to interpret it ina few different ways! Great job!

    Laura xxx