In a frantic attempt,
To break her heart…
Her brain followed
His died.
Author notes
It's a bit of a play on words of the quote...I dunno...I'm bored now -_-
The title is another way of saying heart in french, I believe there are two or three
A contest entry
- PIF QUICKIE 10/13/15 by Immortal Obscurity.
300 points, ended March 6, 2008, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Short, but still one that needed reading a few times. Excellent work. I love the word limit contests.
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This is beautiful! I speak French, so I picked up on the heart thing...
This one just had so many different meanings, and I found myself trying to interpret it ina few different ways! Great job!
Laura xxx


