Red hot sword
through the heart
tempers both the steel
and unchecked emotions...
Author notes
13 words
in 15 minutes
prompt inspired
A contest entry
- PIF QUICKIE 10/13/15 by Immortal Obscurity.
300 points, ended March 6, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Where does it take you?
Comments
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Wow!
Succinct and powerful. Love this piece. Very nicely done. Love how both the sword and the one with the pierced heart are "forged" by the encounter.
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Ooh, this is nice! It's deep, dark, and metaphorical, and it just hits home on so many levels! Well done, and good luck!
Laura xxx
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