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Forged

Red hot sword
through the heart
tempers both the steel
and unchecked emotions...

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13 words
in 15 minutes
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  • BellaD
    March 19, 2008

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    Wow!

    Succinct and powerful. Love this piece. Very nicely done. Love how both the sword and the one with the pierced heart are "forged" by the encounter.


  • Immortal Obscurity gold member
    March 6, 2008

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    Ooh, this is nice! It's deep, dark, and metaphorical, and it just hits home on so many levels! Well done, and good luck!


    Laura xxx