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Crumbling Hearts

My heart was once
like any other
.......
full of love
and life
but then one day
she broke it...........
my death was emminent
and my pain unbearable
so sad and dark
became my world
in twisted delight....
..........
to cry was time
spent dying faster
then one day
on another day.....
i met her....
here on this very site
.........
she made me smile
the kind i havent given
since before......
she reduced my pain
and my heart reformed
........
thank u
but that isnt enough
for now it seems
i love her
and always will........

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  • Andarael
    March 20, 2008
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    Very sad. Good luck in the contest.


  • SchizoChic
    March 17, 2008
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    Oh happy endings are great. Best of luck.