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Isolation

Beyond the horizon,
where sea and sky meet,
is a tiny island,
so deserted, so small,
that no-one, ever,
has visited it.

Away beyond that,
in a far-away land,
is a tropical jungle;
so steamy, so thick,
that waits and waits
to be discovered.

In the high, remote, mountains
at the top of the world,
is a hidden valley
waiting...
for someone to arrive
and wonder at its isolation.

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  • Serene Rose
    April 8, 2008
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    nice. It is so clear, so vivd that I felt like i was there. Amazing job.
    Thanks for entering!