Like street life living on the edge
You ease these aching needs
And hide me from the consequences
Of these sufferings as I bleed
You are the only reason now
That keeps me here at all
So lay me out in my Sunday best
I'm just about to fall
[CHORUS]
Your love is my addiction
Some call it an affliction
Shoot me up
Your love is my addiction
Some call it an affliction
Boot me up
I feel you coursing through my veins
It keeps me warm at night
And stops me from those dark cloud thoughts
That threaten and delight
So when I ever think of you
Shadows gather at your heels
And show you in another light
I find it's your appeal
[CHORUS]
Your love is my addiction
Some call it an affliction
Shoot me up
Your love is my addiction
Some call it an affliction
Boot me up
Like street life living on the edge
Amongst the pipes and spoons
Just take your chances here with me
Among the wrack and ruins
You are the drug I want the most
To ease these constant cravings
And satisfy my most basic needs
That leave me almost raving
[CHORUS]
Your love is my addiction
Some call it an affliction
Shoot me up
Your love is my addiction
Some call it an affliction
Boot me up
Your love is my addiction
Some call it an affliction
Shoot me up
Your love is my addiction
Some call it an affliction
Boot me up
Author notes
Type 7- Passionate Love
A contest entry
- Love Round 2 by xXxCry-HavocxXx.
420 points, ended March 7, 2008, 10 entries
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Comments
1 - 5 of 5
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This is an amazing romantic poem. I really like it.
Especially here:
I feel you coursing through my veins
It keeps me warm at night
And stops me from those dark cloud thoughts
That threaten and delight
So when I ever think of you
Shadows gather at your heels
And show you in another light
I find it's your appeal
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Awesome write. very good flow.
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good that you for entering it in my contest and good luck!!!
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kind of repetitive, but ok
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bravo, excelent, i'd have to say you're very lucky to have someone this special..i especially love this verse "Like street life living on the edge
You ease these aching needs
And hide me from the consequences
From these sufferings as I bleed"
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