"I love you 'Mommy'!"
Let the truth me told,
The poem was crap,
But it still won the gold.
"Hey there 'Sissy',
now what nice write!"
Give me a break,
And take a bull-shitting hike.
"'Brother', oh 'brother',
you've done it again!"
Let me go throw up,
As I put down my pen.
"'Daddy', that's beautiful!"
Says his young AP youth,
That poem was fucked up,
If you want the plain truth.
The the 'bf's' and 'gf's',
Sign "Good Luck" with a <3 and a smudge,
What luck do they need,
When there 'partner' is the judge?
So lets all get real, folks,
Keep the contests all work,
Fairness and kindness,
And only REAL families first.
Author notes
a few bad words...
uh... thats it I guess.
A contest entry
- Tell the judges what u think...click here and enter! by natchstucco.
700 points, ended March 14, 2008, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I see enuf of this shit in comments to make me want to shoot these persons. freaking clubs. I guess that they do have thier place except it truely shows thier hand and gives the rest of us a view of the cheatin that goes on .
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you got it all in there


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you said it best!!!




