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running away

running away from here

you feel so free

i think you'd be sad oh no

leave me alone

hey you
yes im talking to you.

don't walk away from me
right now

running away from here
forgetting about all my fears

forgeting about life
leaving all i knew

leaving it all behind
love is  hard to find

 

out of aall the noise around me

i can only hear your voise

its sad

to leave all i had

and forget about you

and all i ever knew

 

running away from here

trying to escape

and get out of this place

running away 

 

yah.

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  • catz Moderators member
    March 6, 2008
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    Running away... a mixture of emotions, wanting to be free, wanting to stay, wanting things to be different. Your poem, personal or not expresses the feelings we get when trying to make positive changes in our lives and being so uncertain.

    A good write

    Dee