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Raw Mannequin

Drunk on gasoline
we found beauty

being raw

Now starvation



becomes a communion

A contest entry

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  • B Chandler
    March 20, 2008

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    Thoughts

    In so little words of metaphor, you was able to paint a blurry but visible image of today's society in their need of wanting to be 'perfect'


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 7, 2008

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    a piece that speaks mny truths of things that I am sure so many will relate to. well done with this piece


  • Immortal Obscurity gold member
    March 6, 2008

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    WOW... This is definitely my favourite so far... You've used some great verbiage here... Well done, and good luck to you!

    Laura xxx


  • delightfulmess silver member
    March 6, 2008

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    Very clever and unique take on the prompt.
    Best of luck in the contest.


    Delila


  • Anguas-Confusion gold member
    March 6, 2008

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    Wow... such a powerful piece... the idea of doing things together... well done, the very best of luck to you in the contest. xxxxxxxxxx

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