Penetrating.
Watch where you step…
she can see.
She knows who you are,
you cannot mask your fear from her.
She see’s your betrayal behind your every smile.
Her eyes whisper every secret she has known,
today, your secrets dance upon her glossy orbs.
She may have watched
as you flitted into your grave,
her narrowed eyes, piercing
as you try to claw your way free.
She witnesses your desperation,
but you’ll find no sympathy here.
You dug your own grave,
perhaps too deep.
There is no escape now.
Watch for the flicker in her eyes,
As your judgment is known.
Author notes
The reason I chose the name Grabriel is because Gabriel is known as the Angel of Judgement amongst many.
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Comments
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nice and dark,
i like where you took this -
very interesting, i caught on to the Gabrial name thing immedietely but wasn't sure if you were meaning for there to be that connection. Great write, very strong vivid powerful. My favorite lines 'She see’s your betrayal behind your every smile.
Her eyes whisper every secret she has known,' Overall good write!!
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