A swivvelling Abyss
A black shadow
A beautiful girl
A porcelain hand
A whisper of God
A drink of deadly sin
A bridge to Him
A thorny Rose
A poisenous Tear.
Comments
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swiveling* I believe (not quite sure).
This was pretty well done, short, but unique, most people write cliched poems that are just like everything else written by everyone else...Kudos for being different
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You're pretty talented for a twelve year old! Infinitely more talented, in fact, than I was at 14. I want to see more of your writing! =D
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wow..
luvin' it!!
whoo!!]il be keepin up wit yhurr work, btw
good job
ashlee -**
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