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Rain




Melting nimbus slips down the heavens;
drowns into blackness of blistered Earth.

Reincarnates, as tingle of scented breath..




Author notes

"In adoration of the weeping skies"

13-21 words

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  • Naridill gold member
    March 11, 2008

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    Title - less much for the imagination but the rest was beautiful.


  • Naridill gold member
    March 10, 2008
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    Thanks for entering, :f


  • Purush
    March 7, 2008

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    lovely

    beautiful verse adorning the nature
    "Reincarnates, as tingle of scented breath..""
    lovely