i wish i was
somewhere over that rainbow
the one you hear about in songs
and movies
i wish i was
anywhere with anyone
making out
like that band sings
i wish i was
wishing for something
like world peace
instead of wishing
for useless wishes
like
they will come back
A contest entry
- What do you wish you were doing right now? by strangerforeigner.
425 points, ended March 8, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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This is a great write. Kudos for aiming high with your wishes, but so human for feeling guilty for wanting what you want. Thanks for entering!
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Outstanding
Great take on the prompt. Poetic justice. I think this was brilliant, and keep it up!!! Best wishes in this contest.
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This is good advice, we do seem to self indulge in our wishes don't we.
Nice write, this I will remember, the next time I wish for something.
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Great imagery in this little poem! I really enjoyed this and I do know what you mean.... Good luck
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yeah, i know what you mean... cool write I liked!
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