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Mercury Love

Fluid and graceful down it flows
mysterious, deceiving quicksilver glows,
liquid and shapeless it changes its skin,
luring in moonshine sin,
until it slips to crawl up your veins,
entrance with venom fumes,
and steal your dying heart beat,
cryptic love with mercury kiss.

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I suddenly found it very interesting how love and mercury have similar traits like the appealing appearance, ability to posses an organism, change its shape and size and still be very lethal.

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  • Blue Rew silver member
    April 16, 2008

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    Giving excellent parallels here that intrigue
    and cause the reader to pause more than once
    in this verse of brevity in order to let the
    visuals sink in. Blue