Fluid and graceful down it flows
mysterious, deceiving quicksilver glows,
liquid and shapeless it changes its skin,
luring in moonshine sin,
until it slips to crawl up your veins,
entrance with venom fumes,
and steal your dying heart beat,
cryptic love with mercury kiss.
Author notes
I suddenly found it very interesting how love and mercury have similar traits like the appealing appearance, ability to posses an organism, change its shape and size and still be very lethal.
Comments
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Giving excellent parallels here that intrigue
and cause the reader to pause more than once
in this verse of brevity in order to let the
visuals sink in. Blue


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Oh thank you Blue for your wonderful comments! Hugs!
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