Trapped by longings of my own body,
constantly licked by flames of desire.
An angelic face, no one sees the invisible horns,
my body ready and willing for your desired sin.
Nipples stand erect, wet between my legs,
needing to fill the void, hungry for carnal ecstasy.
Take your whore and fulfill your divine fantasy.
A contest entry
- Whore. by Naridill.
450 points, ended March 8, 2008, 5 entries
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Comments
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Hot
even give this older guy a charge and though I do not write erotica I know many on here love it. So write on poet
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Down and Dirty
Good erotica. I liked it. Immersed yourself into the character. You gave her some depth. Well done, poetess
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Thanks for sharing this sis
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loved it this how you get yo man
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Oh wow this was really good. I enjoyed reading this so much.. The image that you bring with your words... Just great.. My favorite part,
"Take your whore and fulfill your divine fantasy".
Great write.
Peace to you, Jetleena -
my body ready and willing for your desired sin. I love this line. Great write
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This was a good sexy one. great touch of eroticism. Glad to see something new from you. keep it up baby
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Well that was hot and straight to the point. Sometimes you have to be that bad girl he wants. Hot write
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Please credit artwork in my contests in your poem if you post with your work. This specific artwork is Jason Beam - 'Punishment'.
Thanks for entering,
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Well dear am glad you did a very colorful piece, being the title of the contest is openingly vivid. I say bravo daughter. Excellent write your talent is showing...Ma
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Love it sis, welcome back, we've been missing you.
Good luck, I think you did well here.
Ephiphany♥
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Hot
This is steaming hot Rain. Well done
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