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Silver Ballroom

A voice of reason whispers in her ear.
That maybe there's a love not worth having.
Breaking down deep inside.
Twirling her hair around her finger.
She doesn't understand what I've been saying.
Is this all a lie.

I know this story is a companion dialogue
Like a documented narraration
I haven't heard from you in so long
What the hell is going wrong

We're all so over-rated.
Paint your hair in silver.
Hanging rose pedals around your neck.
This ballroom is so laviously decorated.
The event is all for her.
Why is everyone such a wreck.
Maybe you lost yourself in the expence.

I know that you need a companion
What the hell did you do wrong
I haven't heard from you in so long
I'm just the narrator of your euology

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option 3) Silver

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  • NooNiThEWitcH
    March 12, 2008
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    Interesting, different, and weird!