The sonne of God rose
bringing dew as tears of love.
The cross bears no name.
Author notes
"This is a great form of poetry
that flows from my thoughts,
though the picture I see is greater,
I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."
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Haiku, huh? Do you like to write them? They're one of my favorite type of poems (besides freewrite).
I like how you spiritualy summed up Easter in such a short poem. May God here your words.
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Thank you so much for your Haiku
I appreciate your entry...Though I'd consider this a senryu, you may want to look over L1 as I think you may have meant son? All counts are good, good form,but you forgot requested authors notes, thank you..best wishes, Ken IBT
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The word "sonne" is an indirect reference to the worship of the son god horus who is said to be the sonne of god. I apologize about leaving out the appropriate author notes.Thank you for taking the time to comment. Leah
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Absolute superb writing skills in this haiku
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Why spell Son, "sonne"? Just curious?!
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The last line says it all and means the most to me. RC
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