Midnight, so magical, a time for dreaming
Idiotic, as random as my thoughts
Daddy´s little girl, in the wrong way
Needing to be loved
Intoxicating, thats me
Telling lies, thats all people ever do
Eating, totally unnesacery
Wanting to scream but can´t find the words
Open wounds, still need to heal
Living but not really alive
Fleeing, just to survive
Author notes
there is a typo, correct spelling needed pls.
i want a sister or cousin pls
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- March Acrostic Madness by alaskanamber.
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Comments
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i love it.. so good.. short and brilliant!! wonderful write.. thanks for entering!! how would u like to be my cousin?
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wanting to scream but cant find the words
i loved that line i think your poem its self
is amazing you said so much in a few lines
as if your heart and mind were working as one to put
this poem out thanks a lot i liked it. -
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Touching and raw......this definitly captures the concept of dreams in a really dark way.......... i love and hope to read more of your work.
Last lines were a good addition to it.
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How many of us are not truly alive, just existing on a planetary level where our souls never engage. This is a really great piece. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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Hits Home
The things that we have to go through in life...if I were in a different place I'd collapse into tears. I cry for you and I cry for myself...tisn't good to live our lives on the run like this.
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