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[ Xanadu couldnt even discribe, ]

Xanadu couldnt even discribe,

xeric lips, breathing dry air in, to speak these words.

This Twig longs to share the other side

Within me, that you do not yet know.

In vain,I sprall words onto a page, hoping you will see them,

Greatfully look upon thee, in astonishing glory.

x-ing out the past, and what ive been through.

Xenophobia is not a part of me, as i let you in.

Author notes

i like how this turned put ^.^

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  • redhanded
    April 8, 2008

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    hmmm

    this was a perty neat piece thank you for commenting on mi piece as well....keep up the good work
    andi


  • Deathless1
    March 7, 2008
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    spelling errors don't mater to me. i am the best speller. NOT! but i love this one
    keep it up!


  • alaskanamber
    March 7, 2008

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    Ok so I'm a totally obsessive compulsive judge. I think it's a nice write but there are spelling errors and I'm way too OCD. You did rise to the challenge with your screen name. It would have been difficult for me to incorporate the X's in so well. Thanks for entering and good luck.


    • XxTwigxX
      March 7, 2008
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      why thank you and Im sorry for all the spelling errors, Im very harsh with the english language. Sometime it dosent really agree with me.

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